Sugar’s Reviews > Sanctuary: Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse > Status Update
Sugar
is 79% done
Suddenly got better. Still, if the 36yo narrator refers to his 17yo girlfriend as "sweetie" one more time...
— Sep 26, 2014 01:14AM
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Sugar
is reading
Would benefit from a good proof & edit (if only to take out the dozens of redundant instances of, "like I said" & "i'm the sort of person"/"if you knew me". Paper-thin characters. Pretty good plot with some very very boring, implausible conversations.
— Oct 01, 2014 01:31PM

