Sugar’s Reviews > Sanctuary: Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse > Status Update

Would benefit from a good proof & edit (if only to take out the dozens of redundant instances of, "like I said" & "i'm the sort of person"/"if you knew me". Paper-thin characters. Pretty good plot with some very very boring, implausible conversations.

Suddenly got better. Still, if the 36yo narrator refers to his 17yo girlfriend as "sweetie" one more time...