Amy’s Reviews > More Than This > Status Update

I'm having a really hard time. I love the premise of this story. It has so much potential, but the immaturity of the characters has me wanting to DNF it right now.

So apparently Jake's dad got an "offer he couldn't refuse" to work in Australia. As a lawyer. And not as an international corporate lawyer, which might have been believable, but as a do-gooder family lawyer overseeing other do-gooder family lawyers. A law degree isn't like a medical degree. They don't even transfer from state to state, much less countries. I hope this is explained at some point...

I'm really enjoying the story, but some of the grammatical and punctuation errors are distracting. Using "were" instead of "we're," and "bought" when "brought" would have been the correct word. I'm perfectly willing to overlook the occasional slip, no one is perfect, but when it's repeated constantly it makes me want to pull my hair out.