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Star system. In almost every star system. Not solar system. π€¦π»ββοΈ There's only one solar system, because we call our star Sol.
— Jun 09, 2022 10:36AM
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When you finally limp over the finish line but everyone's gone home. That's this ending. π
— Jun 13, 2022 03:40PM
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
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This is when you have to asked if having only one POV is worth it.
Pro: It's easier for the author to keep track of.
Con: When you really need to know what's happening elsewhere, you have to deliver it afterward in a monologue (I'm assuming), thus losing all momentum of the climax.
— Jun 13, 2022 11:36AM
Pro: It's easier for the author to keep track of.
Con: When you really need to know what's happening elsewhere, you have to deliver it afterward in a monologue (I'm assuming), thus losing all momentum of the climax.
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
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This is a pretty standard space drama so far. Not really feeling the chemistry between the MCs either.
— Jun 11, 2022 08:05AM
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I've had this on my TBR for ages and I was thinking about finally reading it the other day. This doesn't help. π
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Elena wrote: "I've had this on my TBR for ages and I was thinking about finally reading it the other day. This doesn't help. π"π I'm sure Teal wouldn't make it far if even I'm noticing stuff. π€
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