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Elly K
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While reading my book I've noticed that one of the characters in my book, Victor's mom, has been really mean and rude to Victor. I think that her motivation for this is her husband. He just kind of goes along with life and doesn't really do anything right. So she might want to push Victor to do everything right but isn't very nice about it.
— Sep 15, 2014 12:10PM
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Elly K
is on page 174 of 311
When my character, Victor, gets bullied, he just keeps his anger all inside. I think that the bullying is external because Victor can't help that Bull bullies him he just does it.
— Sep 22, 2014 12:06PM
Elly K
is on page 98 of 311
While reading my book I've noticed that Bull'so mother is extremely mean to Bull. I think she is mean to Bull because she misses her husband. I think she misses her husband because a year ago her husband left her for a 25 year old woman.
— Sep 16, 2014 12:22PM
Elly K
is on page 57 of 311
I think that there are two dynamic characters in my book. The first one is Victor and his catalyst is Bull because Bull lives to bully him. Everyday Victor goes to school and gets terrorized by Bull. The next dynamic character is Bull, he gets beaten and punched by his mother and grandfather everyday (even when they are completely drunk). Bull has two catalysts, one is his mother and one is his grandfather.
— Sep 09, 2014 12:15PM
