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I just aged 10 years reading that paragraph!! Someone got an A on description writing! "It had gotten darker while in the store. walking to my car one of my bags broke." 2 sentences would have freaking worked. If the book is like this I quit.
— Sep 08, 2014 02:37PM
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"The lights blinked on in the time I was in the store, casting an dreamlike glow over the parking lot.I pulled my purse strap on my shoulder and switched the plastic bags from one hand to the other when the plastic bag broke and my purchases fell to the concrete.."
— Sep 08, 2014 02:32PM
