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Daniel
is 31% done
yet another person giving writing advice who doesn't know the difference between passive and past progressive. probably another victim of strunk and white.
— May 28, 2022 10:13AM
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Daniel
is 45% done
well balanced show/tell coverage a nice surprise after the passive voice debacle, though a few of her examples were borderline for me.
— May 29, 2022 01:50PM
