Tin Minute’s Reviews > The Genesis Wars > Status Update
Tin Minute
is 6% done
Ok, now new characters are being spoken to but we as the readers have no idea who they are. This is REALLY taking me out of the story and distancing me from the plot. WHO ARE THESE PEOPLE and WHY SHOULD I CARE? 😮💨🧘🏽♀️🧘🏽 Breathing it out, and continuing on.
— May 20, 2022 09:04AM
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Tin Minute
is 65% done
Someone, anyone! Please tell this story gets better and at some point starts to make more sense. I’m really struggling not to DNF this book. Should I keep giving it chances? 😩😩😩
— May 22, 2022 03:15AM
Tin Minute
is 25% done
What is doing this book in:
🤺-Opening with a disjointed fight scene
🤷🏽♀️-Lack of a proper intro to the land Nami ran away to
😴- A narrator who sounds disinterested, and sleepy
🕵🏾-The appearance of characters the author knows we’ve never met, and receive no intro
😭- Nami is still trying to tell people who have been surviving without her, how to do things
— May 21, 2022 01:56PM
🤺-Opening with a disjointed fight scene
🤷🏽♀️-Lack of a proper intro to the land Nami ran away to
😴- A narrator who sounds disinterested, and sleepy
🕵🏾-The appearance of characters the author knows we’ve never met, and receive no intro
😭- Nami is still trying to tell people who have been surviving without her, how to do things
Tin Minute
is 2% done
Slow start. There’s a fight going on, but it’s seems more like a passive aggressive practice session than anything actually life threatening. Haven’t even finished the first chapter yet and it just feels haphazard and jumbled. I’m assuming the person narrating is Nami but I’m not. Honestly, from the way it’s written, I really don’t care what happens whoever this is. Hopefully things pick up.
— May 20, 2022 08:34AM
