Danielle’s Reviews > Immortal City > Status Update

I don't like how the book keeps changing the point of view. It keeps switching from Maddy's and Jack's to the Detectives. Sometimes i get caught up and I cannot tell which point of view it is and have to go back and re-read it for it to makes sense to me.

imagery for me was when Maddy and Jacks were flying over angel city because it gave such good detail that you could really visualize it in your head about the journey that they had took that night.

Time went quickly because the whole scene escalated quickly by the previous events that happened and are now all adding up and are really getting good. I just want to know what is going to happen.

I would change the way that the whole scene moved so quickly, and rushed because it seems like everything was fast paced, so i had to go back and re-read it a few times to catch up with everything that just happened.