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oh, yes an artist who graduated from a highly regarded art school who's never heard of Bosch. that makes sense. >.> I mean i guess it's not the dumbest thing in the book

52% and suddenly we get another character's pov after 100% Riley so far? wtf? In other news Riley is dumb, like he's 27, but I was thinking he acts more like 17, but now it's like he's a particularly dumb 17 year old. Also, what planet is the author on? You don't just "climb" a palm tree without equipment. Oh, and kid had a fight w toxic BF where, honestly, I had to take toxic BF's side. dnf is tempting me

Ah, the old "mere illustration" thing. You really need to ditch the BF dude.

what grown ass adult thinks like this? in other news, calling each other "baby" is super cringe.

well that was unexpected

Not only not is he connecting the obvious dots, it's like he's completely unfamiliar with the idea that dots can be connected. Also the way the backstory is delivered seems a bit late and suboptimal. idk. Not uninteresting, more like the writing is just very slightly off. Also his BF is very sus and toxic and needs to go.