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H.S. Kylian
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Just realized that the kids aren't described as being a boy and girl until their names are given? Why use 'small child' and 'it' if it's obvious they're a boy and girl? It's one thing with a newborn; but these kids are 1 and 3.
It's just confusing.
— Apr 06, 2022 03:03PM
It's just confusing.
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H.S. Kylian
is on page 9 of 269
I almost forgot about the constant switch between Justin and Dr. Justin Morgan in the narrative...
— Jul 14, 2022 09:52PM
H.S. Kylian
is on page 15 of 269
I have to be honest, this book is confusing me in some ways.
— Aug 24, 2020 09:15AM
