Status Updates From Gift from the Storm

"You aren't expected to escape alone, Amy. You do have a Refuge and a Fortress and a Shield. You know, those things aren't going to be of much use if there are no troubles or temptations or fears, are they?"

I almost forgot about the constant switch between Justin and Dr. Justin Morgan in the narrative...

Just realized that the kids aren't described as being a boy and girl until their names are given? Why use 'small child' and 'it' if it's obvious they're a boy and girl? It's one thing with a newborn; but these kids are 1 and 3.

It's just confusing.

Re-reading this...