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Josh
is 70% done
This book is like that old TV show Hercules from the nineties. All the cheesy matches Mo small but without any of the tongue and cheek crowd winking that Xena had.
— Apr 06, 2022 04:08AM
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Josh
is 90% done
You can read the first few paragraphs of each chapter, age you will get 100% of the plot.
— Apr 07, 2022 03:54AM
Josh
is 7% done
Just realized what is bugging me about this book. There is 0 suspense the plot armor is so thick.
— Apr 06, 2022 07:56AM
Josh
is 36% done
Although I've never accomplished writing and publishing a book, so I got nothing.
— Apr 04, 2022 03:23PM
Josh
is 20% done
There's some serious Mary Sue writing here lol.
Which I don't find anything wrong with! It's just very blatantly a Mary Sue.
— Apr 04, 2022 10:38AM
Which I don't find anything wrong with! It's just very blatantly a Mary Sue.
Josh
is 12% done
Ugh. Some seriously inconsistent plot logic going on.
In one sentence the people are 100% ignorant of the civilzation in the past (that protagonist comes from).. several sentences later, they're resentful of that civilization for having destroyed the earth with technology.
One more super dumb slip like that, and DNF.
— Apr 03, 2022 05:26PM
In one sentence the people are 100% ignorant of the civilzation in the past (that protagonist comes from).. several sentences later, they're resentful of that civilization for having destroyed the earth with technology.
One more super dumb slip like that, and DNF.
Josh
is 10% done
Love the setup and premise.
Some cringeworthy dialog though.. I'll stick it out.
— Apr 03, 2022 03:14PM
Some cringeworthy dialog though.. I'll stick it out.
