Binks’s Reviews > Only a Monster > Status Update

Authors, when you tell the reader everything up front, there are no surprises. Write in a way that makes readers ask themselves those invisible questions. In a way that makes them curious.

When you tell us everything there is to know,
It KILLS the tension and makes for a slow boring read.

Right now, this is insufferable.

Umm...not bad. Now that we're past the inciting incident. I'm interested in seeing where things go. I'd like it better though if it wasn't written in past tense third.