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Carla Barroso
Carla Barroso is on page 99 of 535
The author writes likes this which...
...really annoys me. Just as his use of exclamation points! And italics. I already lots track of how West escaped dangerous situations and the constant action is leaving me tired.
Jun 13, 2014 02:48PM
Seven Ancient Wonders (Jack West Jr, #1)

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Carla Barroso
Carla Barroso is on page 129 of 535
I give up. Have no interest in it.
Jun 14, 2014 07:05AM
Seven Ancient Wonders (Jack West Jr, #1)


Carla Barroso
Carla Barroso is on page 32 of 535
I don't know if the writer doesn't trust himself or thinks the reader's dumb, but to have a 5x5 grid to show where the protagonist had to step in order to pass a trap after saying "the sequence is 1-3-4-1-3" was lame
Jun 12, 2014 01:33AM
Seven Ancient Wonders (Jack West Jr, #1)


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