Mandy’s Reviews > City of Heavenly Fire > Status Update
Mandy
is 50% done
she uses wayyyy too many similies and there's too many different people's perspectives, even though its easy to follow, I'd just prefer more of Clary and Jace and I don't care about 'Emma', really don't care, I'm assuming there's a point to her, there is some good parts though! I just wish she'd stop describing everything in so much detail, 20% of this has felt like just describing where they're stood!
— May 28, 2014 03:50PM
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