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I'm struggling and stopped reading it. this woman is v. v. annoying and it just sounds like she has a crush on Kitty. I can't wait to read what the reason is for leaving, but I can't be bothered reading it all! eventually I will!

she uses wayyyy too many similies and there's too many different people's perspectives, even though its easy to follow, I'd just prefer more of Clary and Jace and I don't care about 'Emma', really don't care, I'm assuming there's a point to her, there is some good parts though! I just wish she'd stop describing everything in so much detail, 20% of this has felt like just describing where they're stood!