Jacob H.’s Reviews > Desert Swarm > Status Update

The peanut butter cookie would best relate to my story. I say this because when my mom makes peanut butter cookies, they are usually very dry. The setting in my book, is the Death Valley desert. Both the cookie and the setting are very dry.

If Jack was to go on a vacation, it would probably be in the Swiss Alps. He would go there because he lives in the desert. He would want to go somewhere cold, because it would be something different from what he is used to.

If Jack was in the Hunger Games, he would not survive very long. He does not have the wits or guts for action. If something bad went wrong, he would be the bystander. Jack is not the type of character who is a take charge person. If he were in the Hunger Games, he would not last, because of his lack of wits and bravery.

If my character, Jack , was my neighbor, I think that he would be a very good neighbor. First of all, he is very honest and truthful. He is very positive and caring. He would be a very good neighbor.

If one of the characters were to be stuck on an island with me, I would want it to be the President of the United States. Obviously it would be the best option because, more people would come to look for us. I might even become friends with him, and be able to have special privileges.

The music that would be best fitting for my book, would be that old church music, or some upbeat horror movie music. I know, that they are totally different things, but they both fit for my book. I chose the church music, because a cathedral is being built out of the ground(supposedly by Christ) to herald the second coming of Christ. The horror fits in because there are killer bats in my story.

Right now, there is a strange formation, coming out of the desert. There are many theories, about what this might be. First, there seems to be countless micro-orginisms that seem to be expanding, causing the structure to grow. A Reverend from a nearby church, claims that it is a cathedral. He says that it is the second coming of the Christ. It is hard right now to make a decision, because there is limited evidence.

I just started this book, and the character that has the biggest conflict is Jack. He is the main character, that just went through a divorce. With a hopeful son, and a mean ex-wife, he has quite the problem! I'm not that it will be resolved, because his ex-wife is not that easiest character to deal with. I think that connecting this family back together is too much of a task.