Cairo C’s Reviews > Jane, Unlimited > Status Update

Cairo C
is 8% done
I had high hopes from the opening, but there is so much useless dialogue about nothing of importance. Rambling chatter from Jane snd ivy and the friend … blah blah blah. Get to the plot.
Also hate the 3rd person present tense narration. It’s awkward.
— Nov 11, 2021 07:43AM
Also hate the 3rd person present tense narration. It’s awkward.
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