Joanna’s Reviews > Rage and Ruin > Status Update

JLA has to seriously consider mapping out her characters and plot. In one page, Trinity says that they have to get him to talk. In the next few paragraphs, when he does talk, Trinity and Zayne doesn’t want to hear him talk. There’s a sequence to writing stories and instead of following that, JLA writes her books like we’re in a ping pong table and we’re the ball.

Ugh this girl needs a ball gag.

I HAD WAY MORE EMOTIONAL MATURITY THAN TRINITY AT HER AGE. This book should have been titled: Trinity and her Yo-yo Emotional Outbursts.

JFC! Can’t this girl accept any sort of help?? TWO BOOKS AND COUNTING

AND YES TRINITY, YOU’RE A BAD FRIEND.

Wtf is wrong with Trinity? She’s such an awful person.

Yep, she’s still a brat.