♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣’s Reviews > Clockwork Tangerine > Status Update

Ok. Some creative bits, some good bits, one hot bit and that was it.

It's always strange to me when an author decides to jump ahead in time when it means skipping two characters getting to know each other. All of a sudden they are bonded, maybe even in love, but I as the reader have lost out in being able to make that same bond with them - I don't know what they know and it dampens the impact, the attraction. Jump time but don't skip the important stuff.

Ok well, this has gotten better. Although, it's reminding me of a short with similarities that was more clever, sly, with impact. Vee shall see... vee shall see.