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First story: The Duke’s Dressmaker. 1 star. A poorly written story overall. The details of the past that led the heroine to become a dressmaker made little sense. The dialogue was stilted and unoriginal. The hero was one dimensional and like a caricature or a Duke. Needless to say, I didn’t like this story. Safe, virgin heroine, experienced hero. Heroine was never with the hero’s brother sexually, as implied.
— Sep 28, 2021 04:24PM
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#2: “The Colors of Love” 2 stars. Just a very underdeveloped story. The writing was slightly better than the first, but I still wouldn’t call it good. I do like the concept for this series of novellas… but the execution so far seems poorly done. Safety was good in this one, no others, she was a virgin, his past not discussed.
— Sep 28, 2021 10:58PM
