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More background being provided to the characters. You also sense a relationship building between Naomi and her kidnapper. She is a bit slow though having pretended to kill her does she not realise he might be protecting her.
Her constant worry that he might molest her is irritating, doesn't she realise he has seen everything when he cleaned her up before chaining her up.She is so annoying.
— Mar 12, 2014 05:38AM
Her constant worry that he might molest her is irritating, doesn't she realise he has seen everything when he cleaned her up before chaining her up.She is so annoying.
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James
is 77% done
Things have moved on apace. the evnts of the birthday party become clear. Naomi makes good her second attempt at escape. But when she reachs the village shop she is stopped in her tracks by the news headline, it appears she died on her honeymoon. Dan rescues her from the shop and tells her the full story. He reveals who are behind the events and the reasoning.
Naomi wants to go to the police but Dan will not let her
— Mar 14, 2014 05:47AM
Naomi wants to go to the police but Dan will not let her
James
is 54% done
More facts being revealed. The first is that Naomi's kidnapper is Nathan's brother Dan. In the dark Naomi mistakes him for Nathan is is ready to give herself to him. He turns her down.
The 19th birthday party gives Camiila the chance to grill Nathan but she comes off second best. Still not keen on him, there is something wrong.
— Mar 13, 2014 05:57AM
The 19th birthday party gives Camiila the chance to grill Nathan but she comes off second best. Still not keen on him, there is something wrong.
James
is 22% done
Starting to get some of the back story. Finding it difficult to like the main characrer Naomi. But making progress at last.
— Mar 11, 2014 06:04AM
James
is 9% done
The story starts of with a bang,Naomi is kidnapped on her honeymoon, before she has had a chance to consumate the wedding. Sge is taken to a graveyard and thrown in a hole. One of the kidnappers climbs in with her and pretends to shoot her. What is going om?
— Mar 10, 2014 05:55AM
