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// While the shout out is really cute, the book this author is referencing, Delivering Dante by Lucy Lennox, is a really really really horrible book and it was such a slog to get through!!
— May 31, 2021 01:14AM
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Elithanathile
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// It’s like the system paid the father to kill his son, that’s pretty much what it looks like!! When shit like this happens I think that everything everybody within the system that had a hand in facilitating what happened to that kid should be put behind fucking bars along with the rest of the disgusting vile reprehensible criminals!!
— May 31, 2021 07:43AM
Elithanathile
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Yup, this makes me so fucking angry, when Jasper says that it’s just for them to listen!! That’s what’s wrong with the world, everyone supposedly just listens, but no one fucking does anything! Sounds about right … this world and its judicial systems no matter where you are in the world are fucked up beyond belief and usually does everything it can to protect the criminal and fuck over the victim! Disgusting!
— May 31, 2021 07:42AM
Elithanathile
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// And relying on the stupidity of your characters simply to drive the plot and the tension is the work of an incredibly weak and poor author!! Do better, work harder at creating that tension and that intrigue, and don’t fall on the crutches of obnoxious stupidity!!
— May 31, 2021 07:30AM
Elithanathile
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// Author, I get that you need to drive the plot and increase the tension by creating intriguing drama and conflict, again for the sake of tension … but why at the expense of your readers by getting the MCs to do the most aggravating/obnoxious/irritating things?! I get that you want to drive the tension but you must know you’re fucking pissing off and aggravating your readers with obnoxious crap!! Fucking stop!!!
— May 31, 2021 07:28AM
Elithanathile
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// Jasper, you’re drunk, but you’re a fucking idiot for putting yourself in danger and at risk like that, and for causing undue stress and work and potential danger to Russell as well! I really wanna slap Jasper right now! I get that his motive was incredibly sweet hearted but I mean for fuck’s sake, his life is in danger and he needs to take it incredibly seriously, drunk or not!
— May 31, 2021 02:00AM
Elithanathile
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// Okay so Taming Teddy and Jumping Jude were both definitely excellent books and if he looks like either one of the guys on the cover, that’s fantastic!!
— May 31, 2021 01:21AM
Elithanathile
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// I’ll say it again, but hypocrisy of Americans when it comes to language, amongst other things, but specifically in this case language or more specifically bad language, drives me batty!!
— May 31, 2021 01:03AM
