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OMG?!?! did they just... in book ONE?!?!? I AM SCREAMING 😲

The only thing I don't like about this is the cheating part. Otherwise it's great!

I really wish writers and/or editors would learn how to not block every scene uber specifically.

He glanced sideways at me.
He pointed his finger to the right.
He rolled up to the drive thru and told the person on speaker our order. "Yes, I'll have the spicy chicken sandwich and a, umm, side salad please. Thank you."

Who wants to read this?!

He glanced at me from the cornersof his eyes.
He gestured.
He ordered.

(Cont'd) orders only the side salad at Chick-fil-A. So far everything in this book is unhealthy including the incest that isn't exactly incest.

I've read books on this topic before and loved them because they somehow broke the barrier. Carried emotional weight that made me weep for the characters.

This book so far is dull. They've gone to the Hollywood sign. Ugh, not special. And now Chick-fil-A, so mundane

So far... it's boring and obnoxious. The love interest Tyler is atrocious and acts like a petulant toddler. And the FMC Eden is judgmental, going as far as to call her dad a loser, and she seems like she also has an eating disorder or low self esteem as she constantly compares herself to the "pretty girls" who look amazing in bikinis and she refers to certain food like their drinks as fattening and +