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Austrian Spencer
is on page 70 of 160
There's too many tunnels between my house and Salzburg. It's interupting my reading! Nothing else is though. Flow is great, the core of the background filled in, now we can empathize with the MC, so it's moving toward a viable goal. Good character work on Carly,
Tunnel's ended. Back into the fray!
— May 22, 2021 03:39AM
Tunnel's ended. Back into the fray!
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Austrian Spencer
is on page 102 of 160
Ok, interesting, actual information from a dead person coming into play, would verify their presence as more than a hallucination. Let's see where this leads.
— May 22, 2021 04:15AM
Austrian Spencer
is on page 74 of 160
"Omission is still guilt, I guess. I'm not proud of that."
Great line.
— May 22, 2021 03:44AM
Great line.
Austrian Spencer
is on page 37 of 160
Reading well, adrenaline pumped, no chapter breaks so far, stream of consciousness writing, unreliable narrator, ticking all the right boxes.
— May 22, 2021 02:42AM
