Status Updates From Manifest Recall (Eli Carver...

Finished. Review to follow

Ok, interesting, actual information from a dead person coming into play, would verify their presence as more than a hallucination. Let's see where this leads.

"Omission is still guilt, I guess. I'm not proud of that."

Great line.

There's too many tunnels between my house and Salzburg. It's interupting my reading! Nothing else is though. Flow is great, the core of the background filled in, now we can empathize with the MC, so it's moving toward a viable goal. Good character work on Carly,
Tunnel's ended. Back into the fray!

Reading well, adrenaline pumped, no chapter breaks so far, stream of consciousness writing, unreliable narrator, ticking all the right boxes.

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