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Deepa
is 95% done
Not cool. It's too neat happy ending and too many major realizations and events happen off the page. 2 months and you know what end on demand, Zara is too forgiving Pregnancy happens at 80% mark. It has so little to do with the story.
— Mar 01, 2021 04:01PM
Deepa
is 90% done
Also I'd like to talk about what happened one day if you're ready or never. A plus.
— Mar 01, 2021 03:41PM
Deepa
is 89% done
I hate when key events happen off the page. Especially in romance novels. Virat's mom confessing. Zara finding out she's pregnant.
— Mar 01, 2021 02:53PM
Deepa
is 78% done
If you accept the story for what it is. Trust issues and even feeling secondary are valid. If it bothers you then it's important.
— Mar 01, 2021 02:03PM

