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Carey
is 67% done
There is too much going on in this book. The MC’s names are too similar so I always have to consciously try to remember who is who. Unexplained back story for both of them that is only hinted at and never fully fleshed out. “Bloody” used as an adjective when the story is set in Baltimore. Editing boo boo’s. It’s...a lot.
— Jan 17, 2021 06:57PM
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Carey
is 84% done
And now more backstory mystery on the other side. This isn’t intriguing, it’s tedious. But will I read book 2? Maybe, but that’s my book ocd talking and not my actual interest level. I’m getting annoyed with never getting the full story on either MC.
— Jan 18, 2021 08:17AM
