Rebecca’s Reviews > Beyond the Ruby Veil > Status Update
Rebecca
is 39% done
the writing itself is very... simplistic. barebones descriptions that lack depth. that's not to say I'm looking for purple prose, but I sometimes feel like I'm reading a screenplay.
— Jan 08, 2021 09:36PM
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Rebecca
is 89% done
I think it's interesting to watch Emanuela and Verene spiral into a singularity (the parallel happening between Emanuela's papa and Verene's mother (The Eyes))
— Jan 09, 2021 01:18PM
Rebecca
is 84% done
it's fun that by meeting each other (and then becoming enemies by nature of their opposing wants) that Emanuela and Verene become each other; Verene by ruining her reputation and committing an act of violence, and Emanuela by growing a hero complex and wanting to save her city by herself, her way, on her terms, even if it hurts other people.
— Jan 09, 2021 01:05PM
Rebecca
is 80% done
CANNIBALISM???? CANNIBALISM????????? C A N N I B A L I S M ?
— Jan 09, 2021 11:24AM
Rebecca
is 79% done
(also, it's not like Emanuela is the only villain. both she and Verene are villainous, pushed to villainy by each other, their own ambitions, and varying circumstances)
— Jan 09, 2021 11:22AM

