Philip Berghan-Whyman’s Reviews > The Naked God > Status Update

Really could have been shorter. A couple of the plot lines seem extraneous. I'm reasonably sure they will develop into something, but they are weighting down an otherwise good story.

Still good, but could have done with an edit. At least one plot thread could have been entirely removed without damage to the plot. Still an excellent read.

Good so far. Some hurdles in the way of progressing the story have now been jumped.