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Geez did anyone edit the French parts??They are full of errors!!!!
Aug 24, 2013 04:09AM
Tears of Tess (Monsters in the Dark, #1)

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I cant put myself in her shoes!!I dont understand her,at all!
Aug 25, 2013 02:46AM
Tears of Tess (Monsters in the Dark, #1)


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Sh*t sh*t sh*t!!! I'm getting TDD vibes :-S This is bad!!!!
Aug 24, 2013 02:15PM
Tears of Tess (Monsters in the Dark, #1)


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I would never give up. I would fight until I died; I’d teach the kidnappers they stole the wrong girl if they wanted meek and broken. I like her!!
Aug 24, 2013 01:45AM
Tears of Tess (Monsters in the Dark, #1)


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message 1: by Glamdring (new)

Glamdring My experience is that they are very rarely edited. :(


xrysa Really???Why do they bother with a foreign language then?It's not that I'm an expert on French or something , but there are basic grammar errors :-S


message 3: by Glamdring (last edited Aug 24, 2013 09:27AM) (new)

Glamdring kristina wrote: "Really???Why do they bother with a foreign language then?It's not that I'm an expert on French or something , but there are basic grammar errors :-S"

French is my mother tongue. I don't know why they do it. Maybe they want to look smart or make their heroes look smart, but given the fact that they can't bother to edit it, the result is just the opposite.


Amaryllis Do you know a bit of French buddy? I'm proud of you for speaking on our behalf ;)


xrysa Yeap, I used to study French for four years but it's been two and a half years since my last lesson :-( I managed to pass the B2 Sorbonne exam :-D


Amaryllis Really? I feel closer to you already xD


xrysa Lol :-D I'm glad you do!!You have a wonderful language and country!!!My dream is to visit Paris *sigh*


message 8: by Lisa (new) - rated it 1 star

Lisa So, how's it going besides the language drama? Is it a realistic plot or a main character falling for her kidnapper after 5 minutes?


xrysa Lisa wrote: "So, how's it going besides the language drama? Is it a realistic plot or a main character falling for her kidnapper after 5 minutes?"

Ummm it's kind of messed up.She is not in love and she is trying her hard not to feel anything about him but she finds her body betraying her,you know what I mean :)


xrysa Ohh btw I'm around 35%


message 11: by Lisa (new) - rated it 1 star

Lisa Oh my... I'm exited to hear how you feel about it in the end. I actually like the blurb, but I don't want it to be super clichéd.


xrysa Yup the story is ok so far , nothing mindblowing though... but you cant tell that it's utterly cliche,just a little bit :)


Amaryllis I would love to take a stroll along the Seine with you, then have a cup of coffee. Just give me a sign when you arrive in Paris, I'll be waiting ;)


xrysa Hahaha <3 I'd love that too!!!Dont worry!!If I ever make it to Paris I'll let all the world to know it :-D


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