Donna Davis’s Reviews > My Three Lumps > Status Update

Interesting that she has chosen to highlight the divorce but not the bulimia. More here than meets the eye.

Youth is on her side, but she's sick of hearing it. I think this is because youth is also against her, in that she is still young enough to be trying to build a life. Older people often have a long-time spouse and kids to care for them. She is still dealing with separation anxiety from her mother!

Doesn't appear to be edited. Perhaps best for a niche audience.

Pacing issues, and it needs some dialogue. Glad to see her develop a spine where the ex is concerned.

At first I felt like this was my colleague and we were in the staff room dishing the dirt about her ex. But she sanitizes everything the way teachers tend to, & it makes her bland. Too much "nice", too much "sharing". Let's roll out a metaphor, a simile. The one moment of genuine sarcasm was a treasure.