Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)’s Reviews > A Whole New World > Status Update

Finally the end...some of that was predictable. It could have been shorter it's over now.

With Jafar now gone this is now their victory parade...

This author needs to get to the point faster and cut all the stuff that makes no sense to the story. It could have ended faster. That chapter was too long could have been way shorter.

The author is a bad writer they gave up this plan to easily what now they turn themselves all in.

Oh man he falls... on a cliffhanger...next chapter.

Finally they get into the palace took a couple of chapters a few chapters could have been skipped. This is already the last part of the book. I'm getting close to the end now. I hope it drags out...

Ok this chapter was at least short but to the point. Someone is getting jealous it seems.

Just as I thought another filler chapter I'm pretty sure the next chapter is too but the last one before it actually all happens...no more planning do it already...

More filler get to the plan already you planned it for a full chapter now this one...on with the story. It didn't need to be dragged out...

This story just keeps getting more weird as it goes on. The dead coming back to life and now part of Jafar's army...