Amber Lea’s Reviews > Insurgent > Status Update

It's gotten to a point where the suspense is starting to irritate me. Damn it man, what does Marcus know! Tell us already, it's been like the whole book.

lol, is this the matrix? This is like a rip off of so many different dystopian stories, but it's not as good as any of them.

At this point I don't think I'm going to read book three.

And Peter doesn't get shot again.

Seriously, why would anyone ever point a gun at Peter and not shoot him? It makes no sense.

Jesus, finally.

God. Every time they don't kill someone who needs to be offed I lose my mind a little. Like, oh my god, let them kill the bad guys and come up with new bad guys. I'm tired of this whole gun-to-the-head-then-I-hesitate-and-they-get-away thing. Jesus Christ. I need to go back to Game of Thrones. George RR Martin doesn't do this shit.

This is one of those books where I can't stop imagining what I would change, like I'm reading my own rough draft. I'm not terribly annoyed by the things I would change, it just feels a little unpolished.

This is why I could never be a writer. With my own writing sometimes things are a bit of a mess and for whatever reason I can't work out how to fix it no matter how many times I read it.

Seriously though...who's going to shoot Peter in the face?