Steve’s Reviews > Weather > Status Update

I'm not liking how this is written. There is no flow. it reminds me of reading The Sound and the Fury or Mrs. Dalloway wondering what the F is going on? She shifts from character to character, one thought to another in each paragraph. Sure some of her, what remind me of Facebook posts, are interesting, but this is a chore for me to read. Luckily it is short and could be read in one sitting