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max theodore is on page 292 of 335
i just read a het sex scene. and for what? for what reason?
Apr 21, 2020 11:36AM
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max theodore
max theodore is on page 172 of 335
"Chase turned to meet her gaze. She felt a funny tingle." litcherally just groaned out loud
Apr 15, 2020 05:19PM
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max theodore
max theodore is on page 159 of 335
oh this is so very Written By Man
Apr 15, 2020 03:12PM
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max theodore
max theodore is on page 103 of 335
“I felt an electric jolt as our eyes met for the same time.” NOOOOO DONT TELL ME THIS IS ABOUT TO GET HETEROSEXUAL
Apr 13, 2020 08:45AM
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max theodore
max theodore is on page 88 of 335
okay this is definitely on me for not being a spy/action/thriller novel person but i feel like i would be enjoying this so much more if none of the secret agent / action movie stuff was involved at all and it was just about a group of people who chose immortality and then the moral and social fallout from that
Apr 12, 2020 04:09PM
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max theodore
max theodore is on page 36 of 335
this has gotten better but i’m still unsure abt the writing style like. why switch to first person for three pages when there are 20something POVs
Apr 07, 2020 04:48PM
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max theodore
max theodore is on page 19 of 335
maybe i’m just cynical but this reeks of Written By Man. also, like, did literally none of these people plan ahead
Apr 06, 2020 07:48AM
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