Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer’s Reviews > Oasis > Status Update
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
is 70% done
I like the idea of the story... but since I had zero interaction with Rowan his fate didn’t effect me at all. Lori and her craziness didn’t either. She didn’t even seem to be good friends with the others. The background seems a little basic though I do think how Hingis were revealed was decently natural. The narrative is just off.
— Dec 08, 2019 11:26PM
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Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
is 99% done
Hmm. Not a fan of the open ended ending. This is the type of book you want done in one go otherwise it makes the entire odd experience unsatisfying. This wasn’t a cliffhanger so much as a cop out.
— Dec 09, 2019 04:40PM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
is 35% done
Okay! Well the voice warning out of nowhere was neat. There’s something about her narrative that I just don’t like. It’s a bit boring. Even when exciting things are happening. Tommy is okay. Luke seems like a stalker. I’m not into the love triangle.
— Dec 08, 2019 08:27AM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
is 26% done
It sure was boring getting to this point. I felt like the mo e I read the more pointless the group dynamics was. And show us instead of tell us. We finally have facetime with Lori here at 26%! Way too late. And the research feels shoehorned in and unnatural. But at least something is happening!
— Dec 07, 2019 11:33PM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
is 5% done
A lot of telling about her friends and the trip. They seem alright though.
— Dec 07, 2019 12:04AM
