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Ben
Ben is 82% done
Some of the stories (like the one about the Parrot Pacino, are funny but seem a little unecessery for the rest of the story. They distract rather than enhance. I loved the Dad's big reveal about his brother, it really hit home.
Mar 13, 2013 03:23PM
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Ben
Ben is 45% done
Still hard to see where this is all going, but there have been several sections where threads have been connected (and now I know why Dad left home).
Mar 12, 2013 03:09PM
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Ben
Ben is 25% done
Simple language but a great story, I'm not sure where I'm going but so far I'm happy to be led there. Story of escape on the boat was very well realised.
Mar 12, 2013 04:05AM
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