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The flashback/forward format is a little jarring, because I go from beginning to care about the present timeline to the past just for long enough to take me out of the story. That said, the social dynamics of this town and the widereaching consequences of murder even on the killers' family is really cool and really carries the scariness of the story more than the killing does.
I think this'd do very well as a show.