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LeeRoy jumps up and down, slapping his thighs. “H, you’ve done rapped. Slow as all get-go, but it’s a genuine rap. You’re surely the first Vietnamese rapper in all of Texas.”
— Aug 09, 2019 08:32PM
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Wow that was good! I. So glad Mr Morgan was perceptive enough to realize Cora would be softened having Hang around for the summer. And she is an excellent gardener. I love how much they love Clint Eastwood’s The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly! That inscription and book gift is really neat!
— Aug 09, 2019 09:17PM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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I love the limited extra POVs besides LeeRoy and Hang... the old woman, Cora and Mr Morgan! It added just a little depth to their part of the story that I love!
— Aug 09, 2019 09:05PM
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“No H, it’s time I hang it up. I’m no more a cowboy than you are.” Quivers claim his voice. She understands him all the better for feeling disappointment, for wanting something out of reach. “Du o ầy ri-eo cao-bồi chu mi.” He smiles a sad smile. “It does have a nice ring to it. ‘You are a real cowboy to me.’ And don’t think I didn’t notice you saying ‘are’ and ‘a.’”
— Aug 09, 2019 08:58PM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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At any time in any place an act of horror is being committed. At any time in any place an act of sublimity is being felt. Each circulating, sniffing the other like dogs, but one cannot destroy the other.
Her brother sings with her for the first time and allows her to hug his arm!
— Aug 09, 2019 08:58PM
Her brother sings with her for the first time and allows her to hug his arm!
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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Her eyes are red and puffy, but by God she’s half smiling. “Du rai pô-èm?” “If you want to call that a poem, then sure thing, I wrote a poem.” “Bét pô-èm.” Her eyes, still red, are laughing. “Bad? If you think you can do better, go at it, missy.”
— Aug 09, 2019 08:32PM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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She’s reminiscing while LyRoy talks...
No need for pin pricks. More slitherings, more crazed itching. Until a soft dullness of nothing. I was instructed to stand, to witness hundreds of tiny white worms swimming in elation.
— Aug 09, 2019 08:26PM
No need for pin pricks. More slitherings, more crazed itching. Until a soft dullness of nothing. I was instructed to stand, to witness hundreds of tiny white worms swimming in elation.
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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She clutches his hand, remains seated. She pierces into him, unblinking, “Du thóc, Ai bét-tờ.”
You talk. I’m better. Awwwwwww!
— Aug 09, 2019 05:59PM
You talk. I’m better. Awwwwwww!
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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I love all the language exploration we get as Hang struggles to put together 5 sentence stories to get her brother to remember her, and as she struggles to understand all of LeeRoy’s words.
An unexpected delight is LeeRoy himself who takes Hang’s temper and tries to get both sides to accept the other. He’s the reason David is even listening to Hang at all!
— Aug 09, 2019 05:47PM
An unexpected delight is LeeRoy himself who takes Hang’s temper and tries to get both sides to accept the other. He’s the reason David is even listening to Hang at all!
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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“Ai em nót Chai-ni-sì!”
I don’t think it matters if his 12 year old sister handed him off to an American in the airport it doesn’t give Cora any more right to Linh/David. But I applaud Hang wanting to respect that her brother loves the woman and sees her as his mom. I wish Cora would do her the same respect!
— Aug 09, 2019 05:44PM
I don’t think it matters if his 12 year old sister handed him off to an American in the airport it doesn’t give Cora any more right to Linh/David. But I applaud Hang wanting to respect that her brother loves the woman and sees her as his mom. I wish Cora would do her the same respect!
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Gahhhh she finally found her brother but he refuses her and his adopted mother screams for them to get off her land. It’s pretty sad. Her uncle catches up to her and wants to go the legal route but she wants to stay and just sit on the boundaries of the land...
— Aug 09, 2019 12:10AM

