Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer’s Reviews > The Storm Crow > Status Update

Well the end cleared up some of my concerns! (Eggs) I do wonder if Auma is a lost princess... which begs the question why woman who are the last of their blood are all queer...?! Resyries was a joy, especially when he shocked Rayzel! E seemed like a bi sexual? Or that seemed to be the intent anyway. All over the place...

This last 7% has been the best part of the book. I still mourn seeing the crow culture in action but I do love Caylus and Res and how close they are to Thia! Even though I don’t believe such a controlling woman would allow her son’s new wife to be run around without someone overlooking her nor would she allow letters... but the relationships are ones worth exploring.

The love triangle took over at about 50% and we don’t see the prince much. Caylus is a good guy. I like the idea of him but it would have been better to focus on different guys in each book. Cramming both into such a short book makes everything feel shallow. The mystery of birthing the crow was simple but neat and I love Res! I’m worried about his lack of magic too!

TBH this is a little boring... it’s not bad but it feels like a sequel where I missed the first book that should have engaged me. I LOVE the crow culture but it’s all back history. It has no real bearing on the current plot. A book spent in this world and my blood would be boiling in this book. Also I really like the prince but we didn’t have enough time with him.

They re traveling and the guards plaid a cruel trick with fire. E wants to start over. He seems genuine but it feels random.

She moped around for 15 more percent. Wondering how to hatch the egg and sparring the the prince. He sneers a lot but also has a couple human moments... Her brilliant plan is to unite with the other neighboring kingdoms. That’s rocket science there! I wish I liked this better but I keep wondering what good one crow would do...