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Heather
is on page 276 of 377
The plot has veered off into random territory & I wanna get back to the main plot, which everyone seems to have forgotten about. After the OW stuff I’m just not invested in their romance or anything concerning Shane; all his scenes & comments are ruined because I don’t like him. Supposed strong heroine turns into typical doormat. Double standards, upsetting tropes. Trying to hurry & get done with this & move on.
— Jun 20, 2019 09:29PM
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Heather
is finished
The ending and HEA felt rushed. The action I wanted took place in the last few chapters, was over too quickly, totally rushed, and didn’t deliver. I didn’t like the pacing; it started to get slow, with random stuff thrown in, then took off at the end. This would have been better without the OW crap which ruined the hero for me. Might have to steer clear of this author. Glad to finally be done and move on.
— Jun 21, 2019 09:06PM
Heather
is on page 144 of 377
This is heavy on the military world & I don't understand some of it. I wish there was more dialogue, cause this is on the wordy side. The hero & heroine's POV's are too similar. Things were going fine, I was engrossed, until I got to the hero's present POV to find horrible, detailed scenes of him with other women, after being with the heroine. This book took a dive, & I'm not rooting for their love story anymore.
— Jun 19, 2019 10:27PM
