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There are certain types of "obstacles" I'm completely not here for in fiction. I can't say they're "unrealistic" exactly, this sort of shit happens in any organization, I expect. I haven't really thought about it, but whether it's because they're cheap, inevitably have unsatisfying solutions, are uninteresting, or just too much like real life, I'm really just not fucking interested in seeing them in my fiction.

I don't recall ever being pissed off by easter eggs before.

Not in love with the rapid pov switches.

Influences... I can smell them.

Airport thriller level stuff, structure-wise. Often that annoys me, we'll see.

I'd forgotten about his memory gap.

Always more critical of the writing on a reread :/ Also irritated the kindle edition I have seems to be missing the inter-scene whitespace. I keep getting a few sentences into the next scene and becoming disoriented before I realize it's jumped. But, choice of weapon here is richer given the context of Weather from Galactic North.