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The style of writing is making it difficult for me to get into the material. There are too many back-to-back sentences with dependent and independent clauses, making it feel choppy and repetitive, and there are also many sentences of lists. I feel like I have to work a bit extra to envision what is being shared.
Apr 09, 2019 05:25AM
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Part III is much better in the flow of writing.
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