Emily’s Reviews > Nothing But Freedom: Emancipation and Its Legacy > Status Update

Part III is much better in the flow of writing.

The style of writing is making it difficult for me to get into the material. There are too many back-to-back sentences with dependent and independent clauses, making it feel choppy and repetitive, and there are also many sentences of lists. I feel like I have to work a bit extra to envision what is being shared.