Dave’s Reviews > The Gates of Rome > Status Update

A little bit of a strange read. It generally reads quite well but in at a few points in the middle of passages, sentences or paragraphs the narrative seems to suddenly shift character perspective with no transition, an action is only half explained or finishes without a preamble ir a new character or an event appears as if always there.

It's strange and a bit disconcerting having already happened a half dozen times.