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Reached the bit Kevin told me about, and he couldn't stop laughing, geez. It was the party scene, and although he sort of hyped it up a bit, it was still pretty good. It wasn't a cool party, it was an old people party with old people sitting down on chairs, and no big speakers, just 45s playing, then came the dancing >< I really like how this is written in stream of consciousness, and gets into the MC's head.
— Jan 10, 2019 04:41AM
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I liked when his grandfather said cricket is for gentleman and football is for thugs, it's such an person thing to say, lol.
— Jan 20, 2019 05:39AM
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Feeling sorry how the boy best friend gone to live Foreign. This has also happened to me, it's really sad, but it be like that sometimes. His mum is a good mum ^^
— Jan 12, 2019 05:12PM
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With just ten pages in, this is so fun and reminds me of me and my sister as children, with the naughtiness and revenge, but as the younger sibling, I would never get in trouble. (haha) I really find the descriptions are very good, and not forced, sometimes I get some forced, trying reeeeaaaaaallll hard to sound Caribbean, and it does not work :/ ("the sun was golden like a mango" no eh) This one is going good.
— Jan 09, 2019 05:45AM
