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I liked when his grandfather said cricket is for gentleman and football is for thugs, it's such an person thing to say, lol.

Feeling sorry how the boy best friend gone to live Foreign. This has also happened to me, it's really sad, but it be like that sometimes. His mum is a good mum ^^

Reached the bit Kevin told me about, and he couldn't stop laughing, geez. It was the party scene, and although he sort of hyped it up a bit, it was still pretty good. It wasn't a cool party, it was an old people party with old people sitting down on chairs, and no big speakers, just 45s playing, then came the dancing >< I really like how this is written in stream of consciousness, and gets into the MC's head.

With just ten pages in, this is so fun and reminds me of me and my sister as children, with the naughtiness and revenge, but as the younger sibling, I would never get in trouble. (haha) I really find the descriptions are very good, and not forced, sometimes I get some forced, trying reeeeaaaaaallll hard to sound Caribbean, and it does not work :/ ("the sun was golden like a mango" no eh) This one is going good.