Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer’s Reviews > Dragon God > Status Update

Pretty good! An odd mix of adult story and middle grade. A pretty open ended ending...

Honestly Neil sounds like a young man in his 20s many times... this line about the abbot being a politician is a case in point. I like him though and Char... and agree about the abbot and it’s fishy he seems so old...

Hmmm I like Char but things need to get on with Niall! I like his uncle but the abbot seems evil...